10-20-2016 02:03 PM
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Last edited by oskar; 10-20-2016 at 02:56 PM.
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10-20-2016 04:24 PM
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This is what humor writing looks like. It's not so much about being funny but about thought-processes and visual descriptions that give readers a sensible chuckle. You have very solid descriptive skills. Here's the humor of what you did in the line I quoted: you explained the belief that people don't think you're funny with the visual, visceral description of the most unfunny thing people can normally think of. It's fantastic writing. It makes the reader think that you actually are funny. I visualized you depressing people by them having to endure your interjections of relevant Holocaust facts in the middle of a Holocaust-free discussion. That shit's funny. |