You must be reading a different tourney, I loved it. Nice strong play, with intelligent folds when required.

Make your PF raises higher, 500 instead of 400 at the 100/200 blind level.

Hands like Hand 9, dont do that. All you're doing is bloating a pot when you're out of position. Build the pot when you're in position, keep it small when out of position. If you're hoping to get him to fold, raise to 3xBB raise instead of a min-raise, he's never folding to that.

Ran into a better hand at the end, it happens.