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#Game No : 2487961514
***** Hand History for Game 2487961514 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:51:44 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 10 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 3: PJudson ( $800 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $800 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $800 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $800 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $800 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $800 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $800 )
Seat 2: sandman7_ ( $800 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $800 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $800 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 3h 3c ]
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter raises [70].
sandman7_ folds.
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SnowKid318 folds.
greta111 folds.
dmwitter does not show cards.
dmwitter wins 125 chips
Game #2487963136 starts.

#Game No : 2487963136
***** Hand History for Game 2487963136 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:52:13 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 1 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 3: PJudson ( $800 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $800 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $845 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $785 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $800 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $800 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $800 )
Seat 2: sandman7_ ( $785 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $785 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $800 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Ks Ah ]
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
Ledfut raises [75].
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 folds.
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
sandman7_ folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [60].
** Dealing Flop ** [ 6h, Tc, Jc ]
JOHNRRLB checks.
Ledfut bets [200].
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut does not show cards.
Ledfut wins 375 chips
Game #2487965879 starts.

#Game No : 2487965879
***** Hand History for Game 2487965879 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:52:53 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 2 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 3: PJudson ( $785 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $800 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $845 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $785 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $900 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $725 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $800 )
Seat 2: sandman7_ ( $775 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $785 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $800 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 5h 2d ]
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 calls [15].
dmwitter calls [15].
sandman7_ folds.
PJudson calls [5].
JOHNRRLB checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ 8h, Jh, Kd ]
PJudson checks.
JOHNRRLB checks.
greta111 bets [15].
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
** Dealing Turn ** [ Qc ]
JOHNRRLB checks.
greta111 bets [15].
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
** Dealing River ** [ 3d ]
JOHNRRLB checks.
greta111 bets [15].
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
greta111 shows [ Jc, Ah ] a pair of jacks.
JOHNRRLB shows [ Qd, 7c ] a pair of queens.
JOHNRRLB wins 165 chips from the main pot with a pair of queens.
Game #2487969761 starts.

#Game No : 2487969761
***** Hand History for Game 2487969761 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:53:49 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 3 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $800 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $830 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $785 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $900 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $830 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $800 )
Seat 2: sandman7_ ( $775 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $725 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $785 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Qc 6s ]
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 raises [45].
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
sandman7_ raises [75].
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
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greta111 folds.
Gre9ory5097 calls [30].
** Dealing Flop ** [ 2s, As, Td ]
Gre9ory5097 bets [75].
sandman7_ raises [150].
Gre9ory5097 calls [75].
** Dealing Turn ** [ Jc ]
Gre9ory5097 bets [150].
sandman7_ is all-In [550]
Gre9ory5097 calls [400].
** Dealing River ** [ 9h ]
Gre9ory5097 shows [ Js, Ah ] two pairs, aces and jacks.
sandman7_ shows [ Kh, Ad ] a pair of aces.
Gre9ory5097 wins 1590 chips from the main pot with two pairs, aces and jacks.
sandman7_ finished in tenth place.
sandman7_ has left the table.
Game #2487973018 starts.

#Game No : 2487973018
***** Hand History for Game 2487973018 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:54:36 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 4 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $800 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $830 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $785 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $885 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $820 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1615 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $710 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $785 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Ah 2c ]
SonicGoBlue calls [15].
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
Ledfut calls [5].
SnowKid318 checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ As, Jd, Th ]
Ledfut bets [75].
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue calls [75].
greta111 folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
** Dealing Turn ** [ 3h ]
Ledfut bets [200].
SonicGoBlue calls [200].
** Dealing River ** [ 4h ]
Ledfut checks.
SonicGoBlue checks.
Ledfut shows [ Ah, 2c ] a pair of aces.
SonicGoBlue doesn't show [ Qh, Qd ] a pair of queens.
Ledfut wins 625 chips from the main pot with a pair of aces.
Game #2487977989 starts.

#Game No : 2487977989
***** Hand History for Game 2487977989 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:55:49 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 5 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $510 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $830 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $770 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1220 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $805 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1615 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $695 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $785 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 5h 5c ]
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter calls [15].
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
Ledfut calls [15].
SnowKid318 calls [5].
SonicGoBlue checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ 4h, Jh, 2d ]
SnowKid318 checks.
SonicGoBlue checks.
greta111 checks.
dmwitter bets [80].
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 folds.
dmwitter does not show cards.
dmwitter wins 170 chips
Game #2487982310 starts.

#Game No : 2487982310
***** Hand History for Game 2487982310 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:56:52 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 6 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $495 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $905 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $755 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $790 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1615 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $680 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $785 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 6s Ah ]
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter calls [15].
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue calls [5].
greta111 raises [15].
dmwitter calls [15].
SnowKid318 raises [30].
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 raises [30].
dmwitter calls [30].
SnowKid318 calls [15].
** Dealing Flop ** [ Ac, 9d, Qh ]
greta111 bets [125].
dmwitter folds.
SnowKid318 calls [125].
** Dealing Turn ** [ 9s ]
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greta111 bets [175].
SnowKid318 is all-In [570]
greta111 is all-In [320]
** Dealing River ** [ Jh ]
greta111 shows [ Kd, As ] two pairs, aces and nines.
SnowKid318 shows [ Qc, 7c ] two pairs, queens and nines.
SnowKid318 wins 75 chips from side pot #1 with two pairs, queens and nines.
greta111 wins 1435 chips from the main pot with two pairs, aces and nines.
Game #2487988741 starts.

#Game No : 2487988741
***** Hand History for Game 2487988741 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:58:25 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 7 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $480 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $845 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $75 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $790 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1615 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1435 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $785 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 5s Js ]
Canish20 calls [15].
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB raises [30].
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 calls [30].
SonicGoBlue calls [30].
greta111 raises [35].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 calls [30].
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue calls [15].
** Dealing Flop ** [ 8s, 2s, 4d ]
greta111 bets [15].
Canish20 calls [15].
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue calls [15].
** Dealing Turn ** [ Qh ]
greta111 bets [300].
Canish20 folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
SnowKid318 is all-In [15]
SonicGoBlue folds.
** Dealing River ** [ Jd ]
greta111 shows [ Td, Qd ] a pair of queens.
SnowKid318 shows [ 9h, Ts ] a straight, eight to queen.
greta111 wins 285 chips from side pot #1 with a pair of queens.
SnowKid318 wins 345 chips from the main pot with a straight, eight to queen.
Game #2487992581 starts.

#Game No : 2487992581
***** Hand History for Game 2487992581 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 13:59:21 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 8 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $420 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $845 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $345 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $730 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1600 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1360 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $725 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 5c Qc ]
dmwitter calls [15].
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [15].
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 folds.
Gre9ory5097 calls [5].
Canish20 checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ 5d, 9c, Tc ]
Gre9ory5097 checks.
Canish20 checks.
dmwitter checks.
JOHNRRLB checks.
SnowKid318 bets [125].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter raises [400].
JOHNRRLB folds.
SnowKid318 is all-In [205]
** Dealing Turn ** [ 3d ]
** Dealing River ** [ 8s ]
dmwitter shows [ Ts, Js ] a pair of tens.
SnowKid318 shows [ 9d, 8h ] two pairs, nines and eights.
dmwitter wins 70 chips from side pot #1 with a pair of tens.
SnowKid318 wins 735 chips from the main pot with two pairs, nines and eights.
Game #2487996657 starts.

#Game No : 2487996657
***** Hand History for Game 2487996657 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:1 Blinds(10/15) - Saturday, August 06, 14:00:20 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 9 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $420 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $500 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $735 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $715 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1585 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1360 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $710 )
Trny:14597757 Level:1
Blinds(10/15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 8c 9s ]
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 calls [15].
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [15].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 calls [5].
dmwitter checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ 4s, 5c, 9c ]
Canish20 checks.
dmwitter checks.
SnowKid318 bets [100].
greta111 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
SnowKid318 does not show cards.
SnowKid318 wins 160 chips
Game #2487999045 starts.

#Game No : 2487999045
***** Hand History for Game 2487999045 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:00:53 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 10 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $770 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $420 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $485 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $780 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $715 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1585 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1345 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $695 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 3c Th ]
JOHNRRLB calls [30].
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [30].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter calls [15].
PJudson raises [45].
JOHNRRLB folds.
greta111 calls [45].
dmwitter calls [45].
** Dealing Flop ** [ Js, 2s, Kc ]
dmwitter checks.
PJudson bets [125].
greta111 folds.
dmwitter is all-In [410]
PJudson folds.
dmwitter does not show cards.
dmwitter wins 790 chips
Game #2488002154 starts.

#Game No : 2488002154
***** Hand History for Game 2488002154 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:01:38 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 1 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $570 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $420 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $790 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $780 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $685 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1585 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1270 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $695 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 6d Ac ]
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [30].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter calls [30].
PJudson calls [15].
JOHNRRLB checks.
** Dealing Flop ** [ Ah, 5c, Jh ]
PJudson checks.
JOHNRRLB checks.
greta111 checks.
dmwitter checks.
** Dealing Turn ** [ 2c ]
PJudson checks.
JOHNRRLB bets [600].
greta111 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB does not show cards.
JOHNRRLB wins 720 chips
Game #2488008070 starts.

#Game No : 2488008070
***** Hand History for Game 2488008070 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:03:04 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 3 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $540 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $420 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $760 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $780 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $1205 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $775 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1585 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1240 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $695 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Js As ]
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue calls [30].
greta111 folds.
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB raises [385].
Ledfut is all-In [1175]
SonicGoBlue folds.
JOHNRRLB is all-In [375]
** Dealing Flop ** [ 6d, 7s, 5c ]
** Dealing Turn ** [ 4c ]
** Dealing River ** [ Qs ]
JOHNRRLB shows [ Kc, Kd ] a pair of kings.
Ledfut shows [ Js, As ] high card ace.
Ledfut wins 430 chips from side pot #1 with high card ace.
JOHNRRLB wins 1580 chips from the main pot with a pair of kings.
Game #2488012187 starts.

#Game No : 2488012187
***** Hand History for Game 2488012187 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:04:03 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 4 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $540 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $390 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $760 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $780 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $430 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $1580 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1585 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1240 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $695 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ 5c Th ]
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [30].
Gre9ory5097 raises [60].
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
greta111 calls [30].
** Dealing Flop ** [ 2h, 8h, 3h ]
greta111 checks.
Gre9ory5097 checks.
** Dealing Turn ** [ Kh ]
greta111 checks.
Gre9ory5097 checks.
** Dealing River ** [ 5h ]
greta111 checks.
Gre9ory5097 checks.
greta111 shows [ Ad, 9c ] a flush, king high.
Gre9ory5097 shows [ Qd, Ac ] a flush, king high.
greta111 wins 83 chips from the main pot with a flush, king high.
Gre9ory5097 wins 82 chips from the main pot with a flush, king high.
Game #2488015644 starts.

#Game No : 2488015644
***** Hand History for Game 2488015644 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:04:53 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 5 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $540 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $390 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $760 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $750 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $415 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $1580 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1607 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1263 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $695 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Jc 8s ]
greta111 calls [30].
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 calls [30].
dmwitter folds.
PJudson raises [90].
JOHNRRLB folds.
Ledfut folds.
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [60].
Canish20 folds.
** Dealing Flop ** [ Ts, Qs, 7h ]
greta111 bets [30].
PJudson raises [150].
greta111 calls [120].
** Dealing Turn ** [ 4c ]
greta111 checks.
PJudson is all-In [300]
greta111 folds.
PJudson does not show cards.
PJudson wins 855 chips
Game #2488019406 starts.

#Game No : 2488019406
***** Hand History for Game 2488019406 *****
NL Texas Hold'em $5 Buy-in + $1 Entry Fee Trny:14597757 Level:2 Blinds(15/30) - Saturday, August 06, 14:05:45 EDT 2005
Table Table 35021 (Real Money)
Seat 6 is the button
Total number of players : 9
Seat 3: PJudson ( $855 )
Seat 7: SonicGoBlue ( $360 )
Seat 1: dmwitter ( $760 )
Seat 6: SnowKid318 ( $735 )
Seat 5: Ledfut ( $415 )
Seat 4: JOHNRRLB ( $1580 )
Seat 9: Gre9ory5097 ( $1607 )
Seat 8: greta111 ( $1023 )
Seat 10: Canish20 ( $665 )
Trny:14597757 Level:2
Blinds(15/30)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Ledfut [ Qs Th ]
Gre9ory5097 folds.
Canish20 folds.
dmwitter folds.
PJudson folds.
JOHNRRLB calls [30].
Ledfut raises [120].
SnowKid318 folds.
SonicGoBlue folds.
greta111 calls [90].
JOHNRRLB folds.
** Dealing Flop ** [ 9s, 6d, Ts ]
greta111 checks.
Ledfut is all-In [295]
greta111 calls [295].
** Dealing Turn ** [ 7h ]
** Dealing River ** [ Jh ]
greta111 shows [ 9d, Td ] two pairs, tens and nines.
Ledfut shows [ Qs, Th ] a pair of tens.
greta111 wins 875 chips from the main pot with two pairs, tens and nines.
Ledfut finished in ninth place.
Ledfut has left the table.
Game #2488022502 starts.

hand 1: limp all pocket pairs, and call a moderate raise, you have huge implied odds when you hit a set, usually taking your opponents entire stack

hand 2: your continuation bet on the flop was a little big...try to bet about 1/2 to 3/4 the pot, rather than more than the pot. betting more than the pot rarely does any good especially if you dont have a made hand. if you are just trying to take it down usually he would fold to a smaller bet, and there is less risk involved for you.

AJ hand: you are overvaluing AJ a lot. I dont raise AJ, and I dont call many raises with AJ. this was an easy fold when he raised.

last hand: QTo is not a raising hand, i fold that preflop every time i see it


you were doing great until you overvalued the last 2 hands, and they ruined your tournament, stick to AQ and AK to raise with, i would have probably folded to that raise with AQ and maybe AK. it was a HUGE raise (13x the big blind) when typical raises are only 3x the BB.

the final hand was meant to be a steal. unfortunately i ran into a guy that hit 2 pair.

try not to steal unless its folded all the way around to you, meaning no limpers before you. and the AJ hand was definitely the most detrimental hand.